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JUPITERASC
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Monk
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Hi Jup,
Please Note only locational by comments, all i need is North American, i'm really not doing more than that ha ha!
But "GEE THANKS" has to be North American Ha Ha!
But obviously you might be fooling ha ha!
I know you do "Monkey Jokes" as well as me, Ha Ha!
Please Note only locational by comments, all i need is North American, i'm really not doing more than that ha ha!
But "GEE THANKS" has to be North American Ha Ha!
But obviously you might be fooling ha ha!
I know you do "Monkey Jokes" as well as me, Ha Ha!
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Monk
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Please note Conspiracy Theorist, i've only come back to honour your poems, they are really good, and i love poetry!
I do favour W. B. Yeats, but only because i study Hermetic beliefs, sorry that i like to monkey around with Jup, sadly it is both our natures!
We don't mean harm to your really good poems, i would always say they are very good, and i looove them!
I do favour W. B. Yeats, but only because i study Hermetic beliefs, sorry that i like to monkey around with Jup, sadly it is both our natures!
We don't mean harm to your really good poems, i would always say they are very good, and i looove them!
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Eh, he may seem serene,
Singing epistles; church bells in the sistine,
Blowing whistles whilst wetted by the drizzle....
Secretly, it careens,
The grinning teeth minstrel's morbidity bursting at the seams,
Blitzkrieged by a concealed missile
Caught in a lurch, the smile leaves;
Reeling with a nose bleeding,
This is no mere sniffle: Don't sneeze!
Oh jeez, if we had known he's a stiff breeze
Our teases would have desist
This simple, giggling skeeze is really made out of fissile;
Even so, we couldn't resist.
Singing epistles; church bells in the sistine,
Blowing whistles whilst wetted by the drizzle....
Secretly, it careens,
The grinning teeth minstrel's morbidity bursting at the seams,
Blitzkrieged by a concealed missile
Caught in a lurch, the smile leaves;
Reeling with a nose bleeding,
This is no mere sniffle: Don't sneeze!
Oh jeez, if we had known he's a stiff breeze
Our teases would have desist
This simple, giggling skeeze is really made out of fissile;
Even so, we couldn't resist.
conspiracy theorist
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The spirit in the liquid is beckoning,
Perched on her holy throne,
The siren soothes my soul with singing,
Now I know I'm not alone
Through her loving eyes she peers,
Something is lodged in my throat,
Caught between rapture and a primordial fear,
I am no longer on my boat
I am coming home, my dear...
Perched on her holy throne,
The siren soothes my soul with singing,
Now I know I'm not alone
Through her loving eyes she peers,
Something is lodged in my throat,
Caught between rapture and a primordial fear,
I am no longer on my boat
I am coming home, my dear...
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Pulsating, blood racing while in this tortured state,
Beating heart emblazed, breathless from this quickened rate,
Tested fate, chopping torrents disables one from thinking straight,
Vehement ventricles pumping; The tribe celebrates with rhythmic thumping,
My eardrums a conduit for their God of hate
Beating heart emblazed, breathless from this quickened rate,
Tested fate, chopping torrents disables one from thinking straight,
Vehement ventricles pumping; The tribe celebrates with rhythmic thumping,
My eardrums a conduit for their God of hate
Blaze
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Hey, mind if I try my hand at a poem? I'm not good at it, but here goes something!
It's called "Lonely Loner"
This lonely loner sits around,
That lonely loner wanders town,
This lonely loner meets the you,
These lonely loners become the two,
The lonely loners live a day,
The lonely loners love to play,
The lonely loners sing and dance,
The lonely loners find romance,
The lonely hearts all lit ablaze,
These lonely hearts forget lonely days.
But life for them has other plans,
Living both in foreign lands,
These lonely loners meet demands.
The lonely loners no longer play,
The lonely loners sing a nay,
The lonely hearts grow cold as ice,
The lonely loners forget fun nights,
The lonely loners go back to olden ways,
Wandering around in a lonely daze.
This lonely loner sits around,
That lonely loner wanders town,
These lonely loners never meet the you,
But both shall never forget what it's like to be two....
For the lonely heart that taught me pain.
It's called "Lonely Loner"
This lonely loner sits around,
That lonely loner wanders town,
This lonely loner meets the you,
These lonely loners become the two,
The lonely loners live a day,
The lonely loners love to play,
The lonely loners sing and dance,
The lonely loners find romance,
The lonely hearts all lit ablaze,
These lonely hearts forget lonely days.
But life for them has other plans,
Living both in foreign lands,
These lonely loners meet demands.
The lonely loners no longer play,
The lonely loners sing a nay,
The lonely hearts grow cold as ice,
The lonely loners forget fun nights,
The lonely loners go back to olden ways,
Wandering around in a lonely daze.
This lonely loner sits around,
That lonely loner wanders town,
These lonely loners never meet the you,
But both shall never forget what it's like to be two....
For the lonely heart that taught me pain.
conspiracy theorist
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Hey Blaze,
If you have the urge to write some poetry, then by all means take a crack at it. There is no need to tell yourself you aren't good at it if you haven't given it a good go.
I liked your poem, it tells a colourful story. Is it based on personal experience?
Blaze
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Thanks!
And yea, you guessed it right. Sometimes things just aren't "meant" to be, eh?
If another poem comes to mind I'll be sure to write it down here.
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You rang Bunraku?
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Thanks for the endorsement Bun. 
I haven't written anything of consequence in a good while.
I haven't written anything of consequence in a good while.
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Of course, all kinds of poems are welcome.