A song I wrote ("WWIII" by Lytton Hall), needs musical score

If y'all know anyone who knows anyone who knows anyone who's in a band or is a band or can summon a band with three mystic artifacts, do me a solid and point 'em to me, yeah? Local bands up here are either folk or Christian groups, and I was going for a hard rock thing, with my lyrics. I can't play musical instruments for **** (I have fantastic tone-recognition, I just can't keep myself practicing the manual dexterity long enough to get it down to muscle memory) and I don't write musical notation so well, either. So having someone with both said skills would be an enormous benefit.

"WWIII" by Lytton Hall
[CHORUS]>
When we ignore intelligence inside
we let our fears declare a war
And with the blood that surely follows
we are guilty of so much more
So set aside your wounded ego
and let your sunlight shine down through
so you can cast away the shadows
and in your mind make something pure
<[CHORUS]

I just saw them on the horizon
Their fleets of death are on their way
I beg pardon for my presumption
but are we not the ones to blame
A thousand chances we've been given
to take the truths here in our hands
and build with them a better future
Or did you think we need no plan

<[CHORUS]>

With no more time to run for shelter
tell me friend what will you do
Looks like your time is running out now
so with your last breath you must choose
to rise above your tainted convictions
and put to rest the world you knew
so you can muster all your forces
and with them forge a world of truth

<[CHORUS]>

Now when all the dust has settled
and our view of things made clear
you will find that all this started
'cause you were subject to your peers
As my words ring through the wind
and bright coronas scar the earth
I will leave you with this wisdom
Think for yourself to save this world

<[CHORUS x2]>

Oh, and I've been working on another song for a while, too, but I keep scrapping everything but the chorus. Eventually I'll get the rest sounding right. It's just always seemed too rushed to me. WWIII came out well, though, I thought. The chorus goes:

"Broken Cog" by Lytton Hall (Chorus only)
Am I beastial nature
Have I lost all my control
Do I pay for my transgressions
with the torments of my soul
Can I drown out the laws now
that are carved into my blood
or do I give into the forces
as another broken cog

Aha! Found another of the few songs I've actually finished! It was in a stack of papers in a cupboard. It, too, lacks a musical score, but I was going more contemporary rock in my mind's ear.

"On Sable Wings" by Lytton Hall
[Begin Chorus]
On sable wings she comes to me
like a vision from a dream
I've waited forever to see her face
now I'm dying in her embrace
On sable wings
[End Chorus]

That morning at breakfast
I was with my friends
Was the only one
still alone but then
the door swung open
and she walked in
My heart skipped a beat
Could this be the end
of my winter; it's been so long
Wished I could kiss her
as I wrote this song

[Chorus]

It's been several years
since we were wed
Got two kids together
One blonde and one red
I look back on my life
She was worth the wait
No doubt about it
she was my fate
Funny how life
can take it's time
bringing lovers together
but she's still mine

[Chorus x2]

It's midnight in East-Wing
of the elder-care ward
We two have lived long
and even prospered
Our children and grandkids
are gathered around
to give us a last hug
their tears on the ground
But as the light fades
from our locking eyes
there's one thing I see clear
in her as we die

[Chorus]

And if I had to live it over again
there's no one else I would seek in the end

[Final Chorus]

"Oh I done been banned"
"Oh he's been banned"
"Gone from this land"
"Gone from the land"
"No one can see my now"
Ohhh, no one"
"And I've broken down"
"Soooo, so down"
"My wife of my dreams"
"Offff his dreams"
"Stuck the blade in......meeeeeeeeeeeeee"

Blaze said:

"Oh I done been banned"
"Oh he's been banned"
"Gone from this land"
"Gone from the land"
"No one can see my now"
Ohhh, no one"
"And I've broken down"
"Soooo, so down"
"My wife of my dreams"
"Offff his dreams"
"Stuck the blade in......meeeeeeeeeeeeee"

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Wow. I don't remember you, but you were obviously deeply unhappy about something I said. Must have really burned you for you to go making such a hissy-fit. Now I'm curious just how retarded you must have seemed, swinging above your class in an argument with me. Not curious enough to be bothered looking it up, but still. (Bans are temporary, by the way. And easily worked around. I didn't come back because I had no need of egotistical assholes like yourself, not because I didn't know how to create a new email address.) Anywho, was just Googling my songs to show some friends. One's already been produced, the others are in the process of being produced. We're getting a good chuckle out of how petty you sound here, though. Cheers, bud! Hope you're feeling better.

AquarianRising said:

Wow. I don't remember you, but you were obviously deeply unhappy about something I said. Must have really burned you for you to go making such a hissy-fit. Now I'm curious just how retarded you must have seemed, swinging above your class in an argument with me. Not curious enough to be bothered looking it up, but still. (Bans are temporary, by the way. And easily worked around. I didn't come back because I had no need of egotistical assholes like yourself, not because I didn't know how to create a new email address.) Anywho, was just Googling my songs to show some friends. One's already been produced, the others are in the process of being produced. We're getting a good chuckle out of how petty you sound here, though. Cheers, bud! Hope you're feeling better.

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As an Aquarius rising, this made me laugh as I tend to go on a similar tirade when pissed at folks.

That Leo descendant retaliating is funny.

We have this displaced arrogance about us.

It kinda similar to how Eminem rips people to shreds verbally.

We think we are above and are saying truthful and not harmful things.. naa we cold asf.