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piercethevale
12-12-2009, 03:42 AM
...Some where
between enough [...or, too much?]
and too little
there's a hole [whole]
in the middle

...of the donut
...of the donut

Arian Maverick
12-12-2009, 09:06 PM
Oh, my natal Saturn squares like this a lot!

...but is this the correct format of a haiku? :unsure:

Arian Maverick

piercethevale
12-12-2009, 09:32 PM
Oh, my natal Saturn squares like this a lot!

...but is this the correct format of a haiku? :unsure:

Arian Maverick


...it's a 5, 7 & 5 thing...[Gee, :annoyed: I have a thread titled the 7 & the 5...hmmmm]

...that's just it...it's hardly Haiku...unless you keep repeating it...get it?